If I had my own planet I would name it greenery planet. I would name it greenery planet because I will plant a lot of plants in that planet. I will plant a lot of plants as the planet can get so much of oxygen. And I will put spaceships from earth to my planet for people to come and enjoy the nature.
I will make the animals which are extinct on earth with the help of machines. I will train the animals too for not harming the people. I will put cars for rent which are solar cars. And the main thing which I would like to keep is museum that shows the difference between earth and my planet, because by seeing that museum the people will start saving the earth.
I will make the animals which are extinct on earth with the help of machines. I will train the animals too for not harming the people. I will put cars for rent which are solar cars. And the main thing which I would like to keep is museum that shows the difference between earth and my planet, because by seeing that museum the people will start saving the earth.
Harsha,your topic is good but there is no proper introduction and a conclusion..So your grade is M
ReplyDeleteHarsha u need to improve in introduction and conclusion ....so your grade is M
ReplyDeleteThe great aspect about your writing is imagination,but next time write ellaboratively. Your grade is M
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